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-  Hi, I'm Marcel Kapfer, also known by my username "mmk2410". At the moment, I invest most of my available time in creative work. That consists mainly of photography, but I also compose music (have a look at [[https://marcel-kapfer.de][marcel-kapfer.de]] for that), train myself in graphic design, and write text as well as code.
+  Hi, I'm Marcel Kapfer, also known as mmk2410. At the moment, I invest most of my free time in creative work. That consists mainly of photography, but I also compose music, train myself in graphic design, and write text as well as code.
 
-  While this website is (mostly) focused on tech-related stuff (like software development, operating systems and similar stuff) and writing in general, I also maintain a website dedicated to [[https://marcelkapfer.photography][photography]] as well as [[https://marcel-kapfer.de][music composition]].
+  While this website is (mostly) focused on tech-related stuff (like software development, operating systems and similar stuff) and writing in general, I also maintain a website dedicated to [[https://marcelkapfer.photography][photography]] as well one for [[https://marcel-kapfer.de][music composition]].
 
-  Since about 2011/2012 I am mainly using Linux (sometimes exclusively, although currently not).
-  In 2014 I started writing software and since around 2016/17 I live in Emacs and Org-Mode. After getting my bachelor's degree in computer science from the University of Ulm I'm working at a small software agency in Ulm.
+  Since about 2011/2012 I am mainly using Linux (sometimes exclusively, although currently not) and in 2014 I started writing software. In late 2016 I began using Emacs and Org-Mode and now more or less live inside it. After getting my bachelor's degree in computer science from the University of Ulm in 2021 I started working at a small software agency in Ulm, Germany.
 
   Besides these pages, you can also find me at a few other places across the web.